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1. My hobby is a read a book and play computer game 🎮,but sometimes

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   1. It looks like you’ve made a great start! You’ve identified your interests, but the sentence is currently incomplete and has a few grammatical areas we can polish to make it sound more natural.

      Here is my feedback based on your draft:

      1. Demand Check
      Status: Incomplete.

      Feedback: You have started to list your hobbies, but the sentence cuts off at «but sometimes.» To fully meet the requirements of a writing task, you need to finish the thought (e.g., «…but sometimes I prefer going outside»).

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2. My hobby is play games.Is computer games, sport games and default games in outside. But my favourite game is computer games. But my favourite computer games is brawl stars, Roblox and clash royal.

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   1. It is great to see you expanding on your hobbies! You have clearly listed what you enjoy, but we need to make sure we hit the specific demand of using the vocabulary words provided.

      Here is my feedback on your second draft:

      1. Demand Check
      Status: Needs Improvement.

      Vocabulary: You did not use any of the 5 required words (Equipment, Tournament, To practice, To score, Teammate). To pass the task, you must include at least 3 of them.

      Content: You have a clear focus on gaming, which is a perfect topic to fit those words into!

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3. My hobby is play games.Is computer games, sport games and default games in outside. But my favourite game is computer games. But my favourite computer games is brawl stars, Roblox and clash royal .

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   1. It looks like you’ve updated your draft! You have a clear structure, but we still need to fix the grammar and, most importantly, include the 3 required words from your list to meet the demand of the task.

      Here is my feedback:

      1. Demand Check
      Status: Incomplete. * Missing Items: You still need to use at least 3 new words from your list: Equipment, Tournament, To practice, To score, Teammate.

      Word Count: The length is good, but without the specific vocabulary, it won’t satisfy the «demand» of the assignment.

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4. My hobby is swimming. I like swimming very much. I go to the swimming pool three times a week. Swimming makes me strong and healthy. I enjoy training and having fun in the water.

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   1. This is a very clear and well-written paragraph! Your sentences are grammatically correct, and you have a good flow. However, we still need to make sure you meet the demand from your previous message: using the specific vocabulary words.

      1. Demand Check
      Status: Incomplete.

      Feedback: While this is your best writing so far in terms of grammar, you did not use the 3 required words from your list (Equipment, Tournament, To practice, To score, Teammate).

      2. Sentence Correction
      Your sentences are actually very good! Here are just two small tips to make them sound even more natural:

      Sentence 2: «I like swimming very much.»

      Correction: This is correct, but you could say «I really enjoy swimming» to sound more like a native speaker.

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5. There is a computer on the desk.
   There is a keyboard and a mouse near it.
   The person plays computer games to improve his skills.
   He practice a little every day.
   My favorite equipment is a computer.

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   1. This is a great improvement! You successfully included two of your required words (Practice and Equipment). You are very close to finishing the task.

      Here is my feedback for this draft:

      1. Demand Check
      Status: Almost there!

      Vocabulary Used: 1. Equipment (Correct) 2. Practice (Correct)

      Missing: You need one more word from the list to reach the «min 3 words» requirement. You can choose from: Tournament, To score, or Teammate.

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6. It helps to keep the body strong and healthy.
   Swimming improves breathing and builds confidence.
   It also teaches discipline and patience.
   Many children enjoy swimming because it is fun and relaxing.In addition, swimming is a safe sport when there is a coach. It is a great way to spend free time and make new friendsSwimming teaches important life skills such as discipline and responsibility. Children learn to be patient and to work hard during training. This hobby also helps reduce stress and improves mood.

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   1. You have written a very strong and professional paragraph about swimming! Your grammar is much better, and your sentences flow logically. However, we have a small problem: you forgot to use your required vocabulary words again!

      Your writing task specifically asked for at least 3 words from this list:

      Equipment, Tournament, To practice, To score, Teammate.

      Here is my feedback on your text:

      1. Demand Check
      Status: Incomplete.

      Feedback: While the English is excellent, you did not include the required words. In a school task, you would lose points for not following the instructions (the «demands»).

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7. I have two hobbies: reading and doing sports.
   In my free time, I like to read interesting books.
   When I read, I feel calm and happy.
   I also do sports every day after school.
   Sport helps me stay strong and healthy.
   These hobbies make my life more active and interesting.
   Reading helps me learn new words and ideas.
   I like reading at home or in the library.
   Sometimes I read before going to bed.
   When I do sports, I feel full of energy.
   I like running and playing games with my friends.
   Sport helps me feel confident.
   I am happy to have these hobbies.

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   1. You have written a very clear, organized, and grammatically correct essay! Your sentences are simple but effective, and you did a great job explaining why you like your hobbies.

      However, we are still missing the primary demand of your assignment. You must include at least 3 of these words: Equipment, Tournament, To practice, To score, Teammate.

      1. Demand Check
      Status: Incomplete.

      Feedback: The writing is good, but you haven’t used the required vocabulary yet. To pass the assignment, you must find a way to fit those specific words into your sentences.

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8. In this picture, there is a gaming computer on the desk. There is a big screen and there are headphones on the person’s head. There is also a keyboard and a mouse for gaming. This person improves their skills by practicing every day and playing video games online. My favorite equipment is the computer because it helps play games faster and better.

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   1. Excellent! You have successfully met the requirements. You used two of the required words (Practicing and Equipment), and your grammar has improved significantly.

      However, looking back at your task’s «Demand,» you were asked to use a minimum of 3 words from the list. You are currently at 2.

      1. Demand Check
      Status: Almost Complete (2/3 words used).

      Vocabulary Used: 1. Practicing (from «To practice») — Correct! 2. Equipment — Correct!

      Missing: You just need one more word to finish. Try adding a sentence about a Teammate, a Tournament, or trying to score points.

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9. My hobbies are drawing,writing books and dancing. I mostly like to draw animals, food, clothes and people. I can’t draw very well, but i like it. I can’t write books, and yes, i like it. I’ve already written five books.

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   1. It is great to see you sharing so many creative hobbies! You have a lot of passion for the arts. However, we have to stay focused on the assignment rules (the «Demand»).

      Here is my feedback on your latest draft:

      1. Demand Check
      Status: Incomplete.

      Feedback: You have not used any of the 5 required words (Equipment, Tournament, To practice, To score, Teammate). Even though you are writing about drawing and dancing now, you must find a way to include at least 3 of those words to pass.

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10. Жұмабаев Нұрсұлтан 6 В
    My sister is fond of dancing
    We are keen on playing football
    Mike is very interested history
    She is really talanted at drawing
    I am doing homework bored with

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    1. you still need to meet the Demand from your earlier message! You must include at least 3 words from this list: Equipment, Tournament, To practice, To score, Teammate.

       1. Demand Check
       Status: Incomplete.

       Feedback: Your sentences are getting closer, but you must find a way to include the vocabulary words (like «tournament» or «teammate») to finish the task.

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11. Abai Zhanya 6″V»
    1.My sister is fond of dancing.
    2.We are keen on playing football
    3.Mike is very impressed in history
    4.She is really talented at drawing
    5.I am bored with doing homework

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    1. You are doing a good job practicing these phrases.

       However, we have a problem: the Demand! You still haven’t used the 3 new words from your list: Equipment, Tournament, To practice, To score, Teammate.

       1. Demand Check
       Status: Incomplete.

       Feedback: You must include at least 3 of the required words to finish this task. Since you mentioned football in sentence #2, that is the best place to add them!

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12. 1. My sister is found of dancing
    2. We are keen on playing football
    3. Mike is very in interested history
    4. She is at drawing really talented
    5. I am doing bored with homework

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    1. ou only need to use the five phrases (Fond of, Interested in, Keen on, Bored with, Talented at), we can focus on getting the word order and spelling perfect.

       Here is the final check of your sentences:

       1. Demand Check
       Status: Completed!

       Feedback: You have used all five required phrases. Now we just need to fix the grammar so they are 100% correct.

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13. 1. My sister is found of dancing
    2. We are keen on playing football
    3. Mike is very in interested history
    4. She is at drawing really talented
    5. I am doing bored with homeworks

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    1. ou only need to use the five phrases (Fond of, Interested in, Keen on, Bored with, Talented at), we can focus on getting the word order and spelling perfect.

       Here is the final check of your sentences:

       1. Demand Check
       Status: Completed!

       Feedback: You have used all five required phrases. Now we just need to fix the grammar so they are 100% correct.

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14. lhdanova Medina 6v
    my sister is of fond dancing
    are keen we on playing football
    mike very interesting is history in
    she is really talented at
    bored with am i doing homework

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    1. ou only need to use the five phrases (Fond of, Interested in, Keen on, Bored with, Talented at), we can focus on getting the word order and spelling perfect.

       Here is the final check of your sentences:

       1. Demand Check
       Status: Completed!

       Feedback: You have used all five required phrases. Now we just need to fix the grammar so they are 100% correct.

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15. Esen Amina
    1)My sister is found of dancing
    2) we are keen on playing football
    3) Mike is very interested in history
    4)she is really talented at drawing
    5)I am bored with doing homework

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    1. ou only need to use the five phrases (Fond of, Interested in, Keen on, Bored with, Talented at), we can focus on getting the word order and spelling perfect.

       Here is the final check of your sentences:

       1. Demand Check
       Status: Completed!

       Feedback: You have used all five required phrases. Now we just need to fix the grammar so they are 100% correct.

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16. 6в
    My sister is fond of dancing
    We are keen on playing football
    Mike is very interested history
    She is really talanted at drawing
    I am doing homework bored with

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    1. ou only need to use the five phrases (Fond of, Interested in, Keen on, Bored with, Talented at), we can focus on getting the word order and spelling perfect.

       Here is the final check of your sentences:

       1. Demand Check
       Status: Completed!

       Feedback: You have used all five required phrases. Now we just need to fix the grammar so they are 100% correct.

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17. Асан Әлиасқар 6 в my sister is fond of dancing.We are keen on playing football.Mike is very interested in history.She is really talanted at drawing.I am bored with homework.

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    1. ou only need to use the five phrases (Fond of, Interested in, Keen on, Bored with, Talented at), we can focus on getting the word order and spelling perfect.

       Here is the final check of your sentences:

       1. Demand Check
       Status: Completed!

       Feedback: You have used all five required phrases. Now we just need to fix the grammar so they are 100% correct.

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18. dolkynbek nurasyl 6″ v»
    1 my sister is fond of dancing
    2 we are keen on playing football
    3 Mike is very interested history
    4 she is really talented at drawing
    5 Iam bored with doing homework

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    1. ou only need to use the five phrases (Fond of, Interested in, Keen on, Bored with, Talented at), we can focus on getting the word order and spelling perfect.

       Here is the final check of your sentences:

       1. Demand Check
       Status: Completed!

       Feedback: You have used all five required phrases. Now we just need to fix the grammar so they are 100% correct.

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19. Жанаталап Санжар sister is fond of dancing.We are keen on playing football.Mike is very interested in history.She is really talanted at drawing.I am bored with homework

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    1. ou only need to use the five phrases (Fond of, Interested in, Keen on, Bored with, Talented at), we can focus on getting the word order and spelling perfect.

       Here is the final check of your sentences:

       1. Demand Check
       Status: Completed!

       Feedback: You have used all five required phrases. Now we just need to fix the grammar so they are 100% correct.

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20. First, put plant near window because it need sun and good environment.
    Then, I water it every day so roots can absorb nutrient and grow.
    Then, I observe the plant and watch if leafs is green and it flourish or not.
    Finally, the plant give me oxygen and make my room more fresh.
    I think chlorophyll help plant work good and stay alive.

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    1. This is a fantastic guide! You have a very clear logical flow, and you successfully used the transition words First, Then, and Finally. Your mention of chlorophyll shows you have a good understanding of science too.

       Here is my feedback to help you make this guide even better:

       1. Demand Check
       Status: Completed!

       Transition Words: You used «First,» «Then,» and «Finally» correctly.

       Content: You explained how it absorbs nutrients, how you observe it, and that it gives oxygen.

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21. Our gym is open every day from 6:00 AM until 11:00 PM. During this time, all training areas and equipment are fully available for our members. The gym cafeteria serves breakfast from 8:00 AM to 11:00 AM, offering healthy and nutritious meals to start your day. Lunch is available from 1:00 PM to 4:00 PM, providing balanced meals suitable for an active lifestyle. The kitchen operates daily from 8:00 AM to 8:00 PM. Please note that all services are provided according to the schedule above. Thank you for choosing our gym and wishing you a strong and healthy training experience.

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    1. This is a very professional and clear piece of writing! You have organized the information logically, making it easy for a reader to understand the gym’s schedule.

       Since this looks like a reading comprehension or information organizing task, here is my feedback:

       1. Demand Check
       Status: Excellent.

       Content: You have clearly listed the gym hours, equipment availability, and specific meal times for both breakfast and lunch.

       Clarity: The tone is polite and welcoming, which is perfect for a business or gym announcement.

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22. I make the swimming club!!! The name:M.O.S (masters of swimming). I need the 5 couch’s for 10 people 1 couch. You should register to my club until:Monday-Friday 12:00-18:00.The duration in:12:00-16:00 in this session: 12:00-13:00 swimming 13:00-13:15 break 13:15-15:00 big swimming 15:00-15:30 2 break 16:00 end of lesson.don’t be late! Good luck,price:15000тг

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    1. It is great to see you starting the M.O.S (Masters of Swimming) club! You have a clear name, a price, and a detailed plan for the swim session.

       Here is my feedback on your club announcement:

       1. Demand Check
       Status: Mostly Complete.

       Duration: You provided the start and end times, which shows the duration is 4 hours.

       Register & Deadline: You gave the registration times, but a Deadline usually means a specific final date (e.g., «Register by Sunday night»).

       3-step Schedule: You provided a very detailed schedule!

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23. Aisezim bolat 6”a”
    I want to announce the first meeting of my hobby club called “My Own Perfume Shop”. In this club, we will learn how to create our own perfumes and smell different aromas. The first meeting will last 1 hour.
    To register, please write your name in the class chat or send me a message. The deadline is Friday, 10 February.

    Schedule:
    15:00 – Introduction and welcome
    15:15 – Making our own perfume
    15:45 – Sharing ideas and smells

    Everyone are welcome! It will be fun and creative 😊

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    1. This is a wonderful idea for a club! «My Own Perfume Shop» sounds very creative and unique. Your announcement is clear, and you have followed all the instructions perfectly.

       Here is my feedback on your draft:

       1. Demand Check
       Status: Completed!

       Club Name & Duration: Included («My Own Perfume Shop», 1 hour).

       Registration & Deadline: Included (Class chat/message, Friday, 10 February).

       3-step Schedule: Included and easy to read.
       Indefinite Pronouns: Practice using singular verbs with words like Everyone/Everybody. Even though you mean many people, the word itself is treated as one group.

       Vocabulary for Senses: Since your club is about perfume, you could learn words like fragrance, scent, base notes, and essential oils.

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24. This business is a small café. The café opens every day at 9:00 a.m. Customers can enjoy hot meals and drinks here. The café pays special attention to good customer service. In the evening, many people visit the café. It closes at 10:00 p.m.

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25. (Akar Ali 6 a)I billionaire,and I make football club name:BKF(Best kazakhstan footballer).Why Best of kazakhstan footballer?Because I will hire UEFA coaches, there will be maximum focus on football, and I will try to be the third president of a Kazakhstani club in the Champions League after Kairat and Astana.And I As the club’s president, I will try to hire coaches from UEFA head coach Jose Mourinho to maximize progress. I will also hire the best possible fitness coach and an assistant coach.Club rules: don’t be late, treat everyone like brothers, try hard and play, and get involved in sports with all your might.

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    1. This is a very clear and well-structured description of a business! You have provided all the essential information about the café’s hours, services, and atmosphere.

       Here is my feedback on your writing:

       1. Demand Check
       Status: Excellent.

       Content: You included the opening/closing times, the products (hot meals/drinks), and a detail about the service quality.

       Clarity: The sentences are simple, direct, and easy for a reader to follow.

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26. I want to announce the ‘Pro swimming’ club! The session last 45 minutes. Please register by Monday- that is the deadline 🙏 ( only 10 people ). Schedule 12:00 Pm exercise 12:10 starts 12:45 ending

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    1. This is a great, clear announcement! You have all the important information: the name, the time, the limit on people, and a clear deadline.

       Here is my feedback to help you make it even better:

       1. Demand Check
       Status: Completed!

       Duration: You stated the session lasts 45 minutes.

       Registration & Deadline: You included «Monday» as the deadline and the 10-person limit.

       3-step Schedule: You have a clear start, middle, and end.

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27. On Friday we open the restaurant named (come on bro) .If you want to come,you should register before next weekend.We need a professional chef and waiter.Our duration at 12:00 pm to 00:00.At 19:00 we have -30% price .22:00 we have -50% price.

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    1. That’s a very catchy and fun name for a restaurant! «Come on bro» sounds like a very friendly and casual place to hang out. You’ve included great information about your discounts and hiring needs.

       Here is my feedback to help you make this announcement even more professional:

       1. Demand Check
       Name & Duration: Included («Come on bro», 12:00 PM to 00:00).

       Registration & Deadline: Included («Before next weekend»).

       Staffing: You clearly identified that you need a chef and a waiter.

       Pricing: You added special discounts for late-night diners!

       Advice on Topics to Work On
       Time Formatting: While 24-hour time (19:00) is used in Kazakhstan, in English-speaking countries, 12-hour time (7:00 PM) is more common for restaurant ads.

       Discount Vocabulary: Instead of «-50% price,» try using «50% off everything» or «Half-price menu.»

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28. Сахи Арнур
    1How did you start your career?
    2What inspired you to choose this profession?
    3What was the biggest challenge at the beginning of your journey?
    4How has fame changed your life?
    5What does a typical?

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29. Hiiii!! My name is Aizere, I want to become a labor teacher, and I have some questions.
    1.Is it difficult to be a teacher?
    2.Are you proud of your work?
    3.How did you decide to become a teacher?
    Finish ap

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    1. It is wonderful to meet you. Being a labor teacher (Technology/Craft teacher) is such a cool and practical career choice. You get to teach students how to create things with their own hands—that is very rewarding! You answers are correct!

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30. Who are you? Where are you? What your nationality? What do you like to do? What do you enjoy to draw? Do you like your work?

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31. Who are you? Where are you from? What your nationality? What do you like to do? What do you enjoy to draw? Do you like your work?

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32. Hello today I want to take interview
    1. When you get popularity?
    2.who or what give you inspiration?
    3.how much you have achievement?
    4.where are you to overcome problems?
    5.why you start training?

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    1. Hello! It is great to see you continuing with your interview project. Your questions are very clear, but to get the best marks, we need to fix the grammar and make sure we meet the Demand (using the 3 dictionary words).

       Since you are asking about training in question #5, I will assume you are interviewing an athlete!

       1. Demand Check
       Dictionary Words: ❌ You still need 3 words from: Equipment, Tournament, To practice, To score, Teammate.

       Inspiration Question: ✅ (Question 2)

       Overcome Question: ✅ (Question 4)

       Achievement Question: ✅ (Question 3)

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33. Hello Dimash Kudaibergen can l ask 5 questions
    1.How did you achieve success?
    2.What you like your fans?
    3.What have you overcome?
    4.what was it hard for you?
    5.Why did you choose singing?

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    1. That is a wonderful choice! Dimash Kudaibergen is a world-famous singer from Kazakhstan, so he is a perfect person to interview.

       However, remember our Demand (the rules): you must include at least 3 words from the dictionary list (Equipment, Tournament, To practice, To score, Teammate) and answer the specific topic requirements.

       1. Demand Check
       Dictionary Words: ❌ You used 0 of the required words.

       Inspiration Question: ❌ Not clearly asked.

       Overcome Question: ✅ Question 3 covers this.

       Achievement Question: ✅ Question 1 covers this.

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34. 1. When you to overcome dance
    2. What did you achievement?
    3.where you achieved?
    4. How did you overcome?

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    1. It is great that you are practicing your interview skills! You have a good foundation, but we need to make sure we follow the Demand (the rules) and fix the grammar.

       Your task asked for 5 questions using at least 3 words from your dictionary (Equipment, Tournament, To practice, To score, Teammate). Currently, you have 4 questions and 0 dictionary words.

       1. Demand Check
       Status: Incomplete.

       Missing: 3 dictionary words and a 5th question.

       Requirements: You included questions about «overcoming» and «achievement,» but they need to be complete sentences.

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